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Hey I need help for this poem on the floor ...?
I have to write a poem online 5 based on the quote: "the heart was bleeding, "I wrote something and then I realized it was supposed to be five lines. so if your inerersted, here's what I wrote: The heart was made to bleed, and made to be broken to be torn up in the dreams of devotions fortotten create obstacles, and never match the expectations cascade anguish was intended to uproot the foundations of protection like embers in Kindle forgotten fire, who despises the flames forsakenness long departed, burst into the chambers of the heart bleed broken thoughts divine breath forces from above, "The creator of this must not have known the true nature of love" for the heart was to leak torrents the form of excessive love purple, scarlet, and blackened blood please help me to write something in 5 lines! =)
Wow, very powerful. I congratulate you:) What if you condensed it as: The heart was made to bleed, and made to be broken. To be torn up devotions forgotten. As the embers starting a fire forgotten, which have long since left the flames Forsakeness mistake, broke into the rooms of broken hearts. Forms of purple, scarlet, and blackened blood. It's really beautiful! You should keep writing of poetry:) Hope I helped!
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